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Правельно ли составлен текст? One evening we went with my mother to the bookstore. The shop was very dark and cool. Suddenly we heard footsteps, I went

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Правельно ли составлен текст?

One evening we went with my mother to the bookstore. The shop was very dark and cool. Suddenly we heard footsteps, I went to the sound. But in the room where there were steps it was not the people. I was scared me and my mom decided to leave. All night I could not sleep because I was shock-. On the morning I decided to go back to the shop, but the sign on the door «closed.» I asked in a nearby shoe, how long have closed the book, and she said, «For two months, as it is closed.» I was scared and I decided to forget this day as a dream.

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  • One evening my mother and I went to the bookstore.
    It was
    very dark and cool in the shop.
     Suddenly we heard footsteps, I went forward the sound.
    But there was nobody in that room.
    I was
    afraid
    and my mom decided to leave the shop.
    At night I could not sleep
    because I was shocked.
    In the morning I decided to come back to the shop,
    but the sign on the door was «closed.»
    I asked the shop-assistant from the nearest shoe-shop how long
    the bookshop had been closed, and she answered, that about two months.

     I  scared and decided to forget that day as a bad dream.

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